ext_305298 ([identity profile] iaminlalaland.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wild_terrain 2008-05-31 06:39 pm (UTC)

Hello my love, great update, though I am somewhat sad to see this end, but this end will mark for a new beginning, especially for the two lovers of the story. They will now embark on a new journey to adjust back to civilian life, that is not to say that civilian will be any easier than what they had been dealing with. They are indeed free from the fear of eachother dying, but now Jae has his family to deal with and Yunho's family as well.

This joy was very well described in this chapter. I am glad Min got the chance to shared the special moment with Jae. He was the first one to tell Jae that they are free, and that he was able to see the smiling and carefree Jae before they part for good. I am sure they will see eachother again, just as Min said he refused to lose contact with Jae, but both will have to move on in life, they will have their own lives to live therefore the everyday interactions they have while being in the same camp will be greatly reduced, so I think it's great that Min was able to have the happy Jae as a parting image.

The last scene with how much Yunho wanted to be with his love, I melt!! you talents with words never fail to amaze me. You put so beautifully the over flowing love Yunho have for Jae, and the pride Jae has in Yunho at the same time.
I wanted to tell him that I loved him and that now I’d be able to say it to him everyday without the fear of one of us dying.
aaawww, they can now utter those three words to eachother until their heart content!!!

But he wasn’t cheering like the rest of the men; he was smiling so beautifully at me
pride and happiness don't have to be verbally voiced and an action as simple as smiling at the one you love convey so much more. I can totally picture it in my head, the scene of a crowd grayed out, the only two in color facing eachother is the two main characters, so much love can be seen in their gaze only for each other, aaawwww, hey you think that's sappy enough to go with your story?? lol

God…how could I ever hope to free myself from the captivation of his beautiful smile?
Oh our dear major, when are you going to give up the illusion that you want to be free of such thing?? If you want to be free, I don't think risking your life to go to hell and back to get that smile back was a smart move. I am talking to a fictional character now?? o.O, dude, I really need to look into that professional help my friends mentioned before, lol.

Finally JaeJoong, we can truly be happy again.
indeed, and we all can't wait for that to happen, just hope that the author *ahem, ahem* wouldn't have a sudden urge to throw some drama in there, which I will then deal with by resorting to my prepared pile of stilleto hooker shoes!!! ha ha ha.

Indeed some of the chapters are quite unbearable to read, actually there is only one chapter that I can't reread, 15, lol. Just too much for me to handle, every other chapters I think I reread a couple of times. Thank you for this wonderful journey, I am glad you shared with us, specifically me, because I gained a good friend (that is if you considered me your friend, after all, I think we talked enough through comments, lol).

I can't wait for the second part of the story, so that I can get my philosophical mood all up and running again. I am heading to vietnam in a couple of weeks, and I was wondering the other day how I am going to catch this series and able to sit down and write a nice and long comment like I usually do when I am at home in the states. I would definitely leave some time out to catch updates, but comments may not be as long and indepth, you never know though, because once my thoughts start going, there is nothing in hell that could stop it, lol.

I absolutely love this series, I don't think I had been as passionate about commenting on any fic than this, that is no way impplying other fics are not as good, but all my spazzing was so well received and well reciprocated. Your replies to my comments are always fun to read.

Your brother is too funny, lol, just one setence summed up what you string us through for almost half a year, lol.

Well dear, till we meet again in the seconf half of the series, love ya.

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