i have flew~ soooooo i loved this chapter. I know i always say i loved your chapters but this one was serious love. i think maybe you were trying to show Yunho's breakdown? throughout this whole thing, he's remained strong for Jae ne? I think its good to finally show his breakdown. It was so bittersweet. Jae holding him up, and the illusion, annnd the poem. That fit the story perfectly. really nice peom btw. ^^ you're friend has lots of talent~ i suck >.> i tried to write poems at one point but eh, they were really bad.
He looked just like a sleepy puppy. eeeeek~ puppy!jae is so adorable~ *snuggles jae*
“You’re heavy,” I teased him. “Well you’re too bony,” he huffed back. “Oi. I’m your escort service, not your mattress.” *giggles* Ah i love your banter. can I use Yunho as a mattress?
I glanced behind me to where Hangeng was bent over, surrounded by bush, being prodded to death by branches as he looked for berries for us to eat. HAHAH XDDDD oh the dirty images that flooded my mind when i read "where Hangeng was bent over.." XDDDDD meow. its the attack of the branches~ ^^
“Yes. Because the mortal knows how stupid the Major can be at times.” “What’s that supposed to mean?” I demanded sulkily. HAHA we all know Yunho has his stupid moments. Aw, pouting!ho is so adorable.
Ah, you made me smile. I've been having a really really bad week and you made me happy twin~ ♥♥
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Date: 2008-02-28 08:36 am (UTC)i have flew~ soooooo i loved this chapter. I know i always say i loved your chapters but this one was serious love. i think maybe you were trying to show Yunho's breakdown? throughout this whole thing, he's remained strong for Jae ne? I think its good to finally show his breakdown. It was so bittersweet. Jae holding him up, and the illusion, annnd the poem. That fit the story perfectly. really nice peom btw. ^^ you're friend has lots of talent~ i suck >.> i tried to write poems at one point but eh, they were really bad.
He looked just like a sleepy puppy.
eeeeek~ puppy!jae is so adorable~ *snuggles jae*
“You’re heavy,” I teased him.
“Well you’re too bony,” he huffed back.
“Oi. I’m your escort service, not your mattress.”
*giggles* Ah i love your banter.
can I use Yunho as a mattress?I glanced behind me to where Hangeng was bent over, surrounded by bush, being prodded to death by branches as he looked for berries for us to eat.
HAHAH XDDDD oh the dirty images that flooded my mind when i read "where Hangeng was bent over.." XDDDDD meow. its the attack of the branches~ ^^
“Yes. Because the mortal knows how stupid the Major can be at times.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” I demanded sulkily.
HAHA we all know Yunho has his stupid moments. Aw, pouting!ho is so adorable.
Ah, you made me smile. I've been having a really really bad week and you made me happy twin~ ♥♥