ext_305298 ([identity profile] iaminlalaland.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wild_terrain 2008-02-17 02:07 pm (UTC)

Big bug for the great update, but you still make me wait a week for it. How could you??!!?? How could you keep this to yourself for a week and made ma wait. Once again reading this with my cereal was fun. Once again your writing skills KICK ASS. This part is somewhat angsty but the humor with the good doc and a little with Yunho is great, you cry a little, you laugh a little, and then cry a little again at the end, what more do you want in a fic??

I know it is hard to Jae to be with Yunho because of all the shame and guilt he felt for being dirtied by other, but as the good doctor said, he couldn’t help it. He’s alive for Yunho to find him is more rewarding to Yunho than he knows. I know he broke up with Yunho and all but I surely hope that the MAJOR pain in the ass Yunho is smart enough to hand around. The ONLY way to convince Jae he doesn’t care about Jae’s past is to show Jae SLOWLY, because rushing things will not get them anywhere, and could possibly make it even harder to get closer. I am sure the good doctor will be of great help to them. Gah the road ahead of them is quite long and hard isn’t it, but hey, the road to find happiness IS long and hard, and only reserve for those willing to walk it and find their ways at the end. Goodness I sound like a priest, lol, I am far from that, but reading anything great would draw out such emotions in you doesn’t it? Jae will soon understand that Yunho needs him as much as he needs Yunho. Indeed his Yunho appear strong and manly, but what does appearance has to do with love, it’s simply great overwhelming feelings in your heart, and Jae just need to let that feelings overcome all the shame and guilt he felt. They are a part of eachother’s heart, and with out eachother, they would be incomplete and hurt, so for the LOVE of all JaeHo’s fan!! UNDERSTAND that, lol, ok now I am delirious and overdramatic, lol

You got some great lines in this part, it would make my post entirely too long if I quote them all, but the conversation between Jae and the good doc add some great comic relief as we readers just suffer through their break up. And the last part with Jae and Yunho is great too, with the lullaby and the MAJOR pain in the ass, classic lame as hell sense of humor that only Yunho can pull off and Jae loves him dearly for it.

Well, I hope you enjoyed my two cents as much as I enjoyed your lovely work. And i hope my two cents and convince you to keep updating, lol, sneaky yeah??

Much love!!

Great work!!

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