This chapter is beginning to make things clearer for me -I think! When this fic started I thought it was mystical with spirits etc. Now I'm starting to think it's more psychological.Yunho is grieving and you've written the grieving process really well. He's shutting himself away because to hear that Jae is dead is going towards having to accept it and acceptance is the last stage of grieving and very hard to face ( I've been there). He is in deep shock and this is stopping him do the logical thing which is to contact Yoochun to find out what has happened, but then he doesn't want to have his deepest fear confirmed. As for Jae, If I compare it to my own experience, he has lost someone close and his great fear of going through this again has caused him to manifest some being or power that that he believes is responsible and is waiting to take away another important person. Now my analysis is probably all wrong but that's the one I'm going with at the moment -ha ha! It was an absolute pleasure to open LJ this morning ( Saturday) and see an update from you. It's a Saturday morning treat! I love your fics because they are very deep and cause me to think and analyse. They are also well written and original. You should become a full time author girly! I hope you update soon, every weekend would be great, but I know you are probably busy. I know how that goes because I haven't updated my fic for about three weeks. Any way I'm eagerly awaiting more xxxx
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Date: 2011-05-14 10:23 am (UTC)It was an absolute pleasure to open LJ this morning ( Saturday) and see an update from you. It's a Saturday morning treat! I love your fics because they are very deep and cause me to think and analyse. They are also well written and original. You should become a full time author girly! I hope you update soon, every weekend would be great, but I know you are probably busy. I know how that goes because I haven't updated my fic for about three weeks. Any way I'm eagerly awaiting more xxxx